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Chapter 5

A Scary Encounter

“Deenu Kaka, Amma said that she’ll call you and Jeetu Kaka after a while. Dadi is just taking a nap,” Jai informed the two men. 

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“Hmm… we had thought so,” Jeetu replied washing his steel tiffin vigorously at the old well. “This cleaning business can be very tiring. I’ll shut my eyes for some time too.”

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“A good idea,” agreed Deenu. 

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“Deenu Kaka, we were hoping you would tell us some stories,” Jai said glibly. 

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“Eh? Stories? What stories?” Deenu asked surprised, scratching his hair. “I don’t know any stories.”

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“You know… Stories… Of this village,” Jai replied, picking up a dried twig of one of the two trees waving their fronds overhead.  

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“Of this village? What stories?” Deenu asked in confusion. 

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“Uff! Deenu Kaka, Savita Dadi was saying that you tell stories,” little Sneha chirped. 

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“I tell stories…? But never have I…” Deenu went on in bewilderment looking from one to the other. 

Jeetu who was listening attentively, burst out laughing. 

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“Now why are you laughing?” Deenu queried, irritably. 

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“Nothing… nothing…” Jeetu said sobering down. “I think the children are asking for the incidents where you encounter jinns, and all those fancy creatures…”

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“I don’t tell stories about ‘fancy creatures’,” Deenu said in an offended tone. “They’re real.”

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“Ooohh… Really?” chorused the two children, wide-eyed. 

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“Yes,” Deenu said importantly. “See once there was a time…”

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“I think I’ll take a nap under the neem tree on that platform,” Jeetu said, packing his tiffin in a cloth bag.

The children and Deenu hardly took any notice of him, except giving him a cursory glance as he walked away. 

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“… when I was going to the nearby village which isn’t very far but you have to cross a jungle to reach there. While I was walking on the kuccha roads it was fine, the sky was clear and the sun was shining brightly like a huge orange. I was in fact sweating profusely,” Deenu said with enthusiasm. “Huge drops rolled down my face and my neck.”

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“Ohh…” said Sneha, attentively. “Were there no trees?”

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“No, there were no trees. Not even the khejri. It was a very-very hot day,” Deenu continued. “I looked up and prayed to the Gods to send some clouds. And then…”

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“And then?” queried the two children. 

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“And then… as I neared the forest it began to get dark.”

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“It began to get dark? How? Did the clouds come?” asked Sneha curiously. 

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Deenu shook his head from left to right. 

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“At first, I thought it must be clouds. I was happy that the gods had been kind to me and heard my prayers, I looked up in gratitude to thank the generous gods and my blood went cold, my heart froze…”

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“Why?” queried Sneha, sitting cross-legged on the ground, her chin resting in the palms of her hand. 

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“A gigantic serpent was flying with wings in the sky,” Deenu said flapping his arms. “Its large wings stretched out for almost a meter on each side of its huge body and were covered in orange scales.”

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“Ohhh…” whispered Sneha. 

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“And then?” Jai asked with interest. 

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“It looked at me with yellow, sparkling eyes and growled. I stood shivering there, not daring even to breathe. It growled and smoke came out from its nostrils. I can’t tell you how terrified I was,” Deenu said animatedly. 

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“Really?” 

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“Really! You should have seen its teeth. They were sharp and pointed,” Deenu continued, baring his teeth. 

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“Did you eat methi for your lunch?” giggled Sneha.

 

“Today? Yes. Why?” Deenu asked in surprise. “What’s that got to do with the giant, flying serpent?”

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“Nothing!” Sneha giggled again, “Nothing, except its stuck between your teeth.”

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“Bitiya, you’re laughing at me,” Deenu said in a hurt voice. “I don’t think you’re taking me seriously, just like everyone else.”

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“No… No… Deenu Kaka. We believe you. Please continue. What happened after that? Did the beast catch you?” Jai shot his younger sister a warning look. 

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“Eh… Did the beast catch me, you ask?” smirked Deenu. “Had it caught me, would I have been here today?”

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“Ohh… Deenu Kaka, you’re very brave,” Sneha whispered in fake appreciation, dying to laugh. 

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“Brave? I am very brave. Do you know what happened after that?”

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“What?” chorused the two children. 

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“I broke a branch from a tree and whacked the beast.”

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“You whacked the beast? It must’ve attacked you,” Sneha observed. 

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“Huh! Instead, it ran off!”

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“It ran off? How?” asked the children. 

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“You see, I had read somewhere that beasts like these should be whacked on their nose. It causes them the most discomfort and they disappear. So, I took careful aim, dodged the smelly breath and hot fumes from the beast’s nose and spanked it right and square, on its snout. It yelped like a little dog and just ran off, I mean flew off in the blue sky, very fast. I, then threw down the branch and continued my journey.”

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“Wow! You’re a real hero, Deenu Kaka,” little Sneha said in awe. 

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“Did the people honour you? You saved their village from the attack of that beast?” enquired Jai. 

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“Honour me? Of course, why not!” scoffed Deenu. “When I reached the neighbouring village and told them of my adventure, they laughed at me. Just imagine they had the audacity to laugh at me.”

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“Ohh... that’s really sad. But I’m sure that our village honoured you. Sarpanch Dada must’ve been overjoyed,” said Jai practically. 

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“They didn’t honour me either. When I narrated my encounter with the beast, they all laughed at me and Sarpanch Ji took me to the village doctor. He said that I may have got a touch of the sun, it was summer time,” Deenu said sorrowfully, packing his tiffin away. “No one was willing to believe my story.”

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“We believe you,” Jai said gregariously. “You can tell us your adventures. We don’t mind listening.”

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“Yes, Deenu Kaka. You’re a hero,” Sneha said in admiration. “Yes, please do tell us more of your stories.”

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“Yes, yes. Why not? I will share more adventures with both of you,” Deenu said happily. “You are good children, not at all like those here in the village. They are very rude; they make fun of me.” 

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“The other children in the village are actually very rude,” agreed Sneha. “They spoilt the sand castle Jai Bhaiyya and I was making.”

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“Hmm… They are ill-mannered. Little pests! They see me and call me names,” Deenu muttered. 

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“They are horrible. Imagine them throwing raw mangoes from the tree and then hiding and laughing at us,” Sneha said exasperatedly. 

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Mangoes

 

 

“Savita Dadi was saying that exams are going on and no children will be around till 3:00 p.m. but there was someone making mischief,” Jai said with a frown. “If I could get my hands on him, I’d show him how to play tricks.”

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“What did you say? Exams are going on? Yes… yes… that’s right. Hukum Saheb is right. Children won’t be around.”

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“Then who could have done it?” Sneha looked at her brother puzzled. 

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“It couldn’t be the wind. It must’ve been a child. We could hear giggles,” Jai insisted. 

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“Bholu… It must be Bholu!” Deenu said suddenly, looking up into the still branches of the trees. 

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“Bholu?” chorused the two children. 

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“Who’s Bholu?” asked Jai curiously.   

 

© 2026 by Elvira Fernandez

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